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Daily Doodle#68: Hot Headed

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Horse head study + Non serious animation practice = This.
I'm gonna be a total master at liquify and cloning by the end of the year lol!

:iconiwantfeedback1plz::iconiwantfeedback2plz: Critique the animation if you will. I'm not gonna beat myself up trying to master it but I'd like to naturally progress in it ^_^

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First of all, I admire you for this artwork because I have no clue how to properly do animations. So the following critique might not be completely justified, it's just my personal opinion and you did a great job on this. :)
I really like the colours, they fit together well and the gradient in the background makes the picture less flat and boring, that's great. The anatomy seems good to me but the neck could be a little more arched, the top line seems too straight to me and therefore the neck is very thin. Also, some kind of reflected light in the eyes would be good to add life to the horse. I know the focus is meant to be on the mane, which you did very well, but eyes are an important thing to make the picture more alive.
The animation itself is awesome, I like how wobbly it is, it looks like lava. :D
The breathing looks good, the air fades slowly and not too abrupt which I see rather often. But I think it's a bit too fast, there could be a little pause inbetween to make it more realistic.
However, this is great! You must have spent a lot of time on this although it's just a doodle. I look up to you, honestly. Keep up the good work! ♥